tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30574775.post5009888708644102819..comments2008-08-27T10:27:04.201-07:00Michelle Detoriehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16678218271885988491noreply@blogger.comBlogger1125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-30574775.post-12269897683670804032008-08-27T10:27:00.000-07:002008-08-27T10:27:00.000-07:00really enjoyed your work, the rhythms and commas really create a sense of the poem's turning in on itself. wonderful!mehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12664990153086092303noreply@blogger.com